Salaam Alaikum!
If there's anything in the literary department that I simply cannot handle, it is poetry. However, that poem struck me in multiple ways, dynamically. It just sinks down and grits out what I (among others) have been trying to utter for some time now. I hope more Muslims will use poetry to an Islamic advantage and take the step in the way that this sister (If I am correct) has done. Job well done!
Ibn
