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Aliyah & Jameela

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Mashallah! This is entertaining stuff. I love the dialogue since it's mostly natural. My only critique would be that it tends to be slightly moralistic which would usually turn your audience off.


It's written really well though. Keep it coming.

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Aliyah & Jameela - by amma - 06-11-2007, 02:21 PM
Aliyah & Jameela - by Karbala - 06-13-2007, 02:37 AM
Aliyah & Jameela - by Hadji - 06-24-2007, 07:49 PM
Aliyah & Jameela - by amma - 06-26-2007, 05:27 PM
Aliyah & Jameela - by Karbala - 06-27-2007, 05:18 PM

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