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On a rainy day !!!!! - masriahmuslimah - 09-25-2003
Asalam~O~Alykum
This is a story that one of my best friends wrote about what some teenage gurls pass through. She mashallah wrote it in a very simple way that will make u cry. She asked me 2 post it here on this website b/c she wants 2 know what ppl think of her writing. I hope that we can all support her b/c she is on of our sister's. Thanx. Hope u like it.
Salam~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Sally Samy
Once on a rainy day, a little child was watching it rain. Her thoughts became a distortion of wonder and confusion. “Come on girl get inside, it’s raining why are you out side? C’mon get it in now” says a voice from the far end of the room. Turning her head around, the innocent child says “but mother, how come the sun is still out while its raining? I’ve never seen this before.”
“Oh child when will you grow up, c’mon get it.”…
When Eelaf reached middle school, she saw things that she had never seen before. Girls here age were maturing psychically and emotionally. She began to see the lustful attraction between pre-teens her age. She thought she could be one of them, but she wasn’t. Instead, she was still trying to understand how the sun on that rainy day was out when it rained. No one ever told her why, not her science teacher, not even her own mother.
Now that gorgeous Eelaf is in high school, she felt like she achieved a lot of things. One of them was being sixteen. She did everything she could to try to honor her parents. “Mom…isn’t it time to start talking about my college plans? The years are coming by so fast. It almost seemed like yesterday that I was a freshman in high school wandering between the hallways of school.”
The mother is completely aghast at her daughter’s words, she responds “Eelaf, what are you talking about? Besides you’re still young to talk about college, you have two more years to go. I want to see you with straight A’s for now, I want to show these neighbors that you are smart.”
Today is Eelaf’s Eighteenth birthday. She had grown into a beautiful young lady with an attractive stare. She received gifts from all her friends. Her mom’s gifts were incredible; they included anything from leather shoes to fanciest clothes. From expensive jewelry to fashionable hats.
Eelaf walks into her room seeing al these things without knowing where her mom was. Finally her mom appears behind her and says “well happy birthday Eelaf, it’s time for you to act like a grown young lady. It’s time for you to be mature, you’re 18.
Now I brought you all these things hoping you would like them. I’m going to the mall, come with me. I’m waiting for you outside. Hurry up, you should have more sense of time now that you’re 18.”
Eelaf with a soft young lady’s voice says “but mom, wait..that’s not what I wanted.”
Her mom with an indulging smile says “what else could you possible want? A car? Here we go again.”
“No mom!.” Says Eelaf “that’s not what I wanted all these years. All I wanted mama was a warm hug from you.”
by= Ibtihal Ahmed
On a rainy day !!!!! - masriahmuslimah - 10-08-2003
Asalam~O~Alykum
Brothers and sisters plz i really need 2 know ur opinion’s about this story b/c the sister who wrote it really wants to know how good is she and what can she do 2 improve her writing. Thanx
Salam~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Masriahmuslimah
On a rainy day !!!!! - Muslimah - 10-08-2003
as salam alykom mariah
It is good, only she needs to revise her spelling, besides, she stared with the question about the sun and raining. Then she lost track of this point, although it appeared as it is the core of interest in the whole story. She suddenly shifted to needing her mother's love and attention. I didn't use the vote because the options do not fit my opinion ok
But Insh a Allah she can improve